Story Development & Mentoring
Creating Stories That Connect
I help children's book writers develop compelling, emotionally resonant stories that truly connect with young readers. My expertise lies in the foundational elements that make stories work - the big picture structure, character development, and emotional core that transforms a good idea into a story kids can't put down.
What Story Development Includes
Story Structure & Plot Development
Your story's foundation needs to be solid. I help you identify whether your plot actually works, where pacing might drag or rush, and how to structure scenes that keep young readers engaged from page one to the end.
Character Development
Characters are the heart of any great children's story. We'll work on creating protagonists that kids relate to, with clear motivations, authentic growth arcs, and personalities that leap off the page.
Theme & Emotional Resonance
The best children's books work on multiple levels. I help you discover what your story is really about at its core, ensuring the deeper message emerges naturally and connects meaningfully with your young audience.
Age-Appropriate Content & Market Fit
Understanding your target audience is crucial. I guide you in creating content that's perfectly pitched for your intended age group and positioned effectively in today's competitive children's book market.
Series & World-Building Potential
If you're dreaming of a series, I help ensure your story world is consistent, expandable, and sets up natural opportunities for future books.
How I Work
Through The Picture Book & Middle-Grade Writing Blueprint
My story development mentoring happens exclusively within my comprehensive course community. This structured approach ensures you're learning sustainable skills while getting personalized guidance on your specific project.
One-on-One Mentoring
Individual story mentoring sessions are available only to writers who have completed The Blueprint course. This ensures we can dive deep into advanced story development without covering foundational concepts.
What I Don't Provide
Editorial Services I don't offer line editing, copy editing, proofreading, or manuscript critiques. These are specialized skills that require different training and expertise.
For Editorial Services, I Recommend: Professional children's book editors who specialize in sentence-level polish, grammar, and manuscript refinement. I'm happy to refer you to qualified editors who can help with these services.
Ready to Develop Your Story?
If you're looking to create children's books that truly resonate with young readers, I'd love to support your journey through The Blueprint course.
Already a member of The Picture Book & Middle-Grade Writing Blueprint? Go ahead and book a one-on-one story development session below.
1 hour session
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